A ‘longish’ short story that resulted from one of my ‘Pick a Picture Get a Story Written’ contests. Currently in development as a screenplay.
It was 1943… dark times with a world at war….
And the type of murder police won’t put more than a token effort into investigating.
Beth’s friend is murdered and she’s next on the killer’s list. Despite the risk of revealing her secret, she avenges her friend.
Some reader comments:
“Thanks, this is really interesting. Beautiful descriptive prose.” –Doug [commenting via Facebook message] Douglas Preston is the New York Times best-selling author of 26 novels and several nonfiction books on history, science, exploration, and true crime.
“Captivating as all his stories are! Dennis Lowery has a way of bringing you in and leaving you wanting more.” –Kira H.
“Vivid and sensuous storytelling, Dennis.” –Vicki Tyley, bestselling author of five mystery/suspense novels
“As usual, it was extremely well written. I, as I am sure was true for most readers, felt your detailed descriptions enabled me to picture a scene in my mind as if I was actually watching a movie! You very effectively kept the reader on seat’s edge in the final pages of the story, wondering how everything would play out. And the ending with – DELETED SPOILER PART OF THE COMMENT- was an absolutely brilliant touch on how to bring the whole story to closure.” –Jim Zumwalt. James G. Zumwalt is the internationally bestselling author of Bare Feet ~ Iron Will – Stories from the Other Side of Vietnam’s Battlefields, The Juche Lie | North Korea’s Kim Dynasty and Doomsday Iran: The Clock is Ticking.
“Just finished reading Union Station, Dennis. For a short story, it packs quite a punch. The characters are well developed and believable.” –Hazel Payne
“You did an excellent job with this one Dennis, read it from a to b, and you really carved a complete story…” –Michael Koontz
“I love this. Thank you for sharing.” –Dawn Hart Jackson
“Awesome!!! –Susan Gabriel
“Love it!!!” –Kim O’Brien
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I’m expanding and re-publishing several short stories and novellas. This story is one of them (you can request a free read of it and I’ll send you access). The combined stories will be included in an upcoming collection. Please contact me to be added to the ‘watch list’ for that publication.